Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Blog 10

In “Imitation of Film: Here’s Smoking at you, Kid” Nicholas Balakar states that many ten-fourteen-year-children begin smoking after seeing the movies to imitate famous actors. Also, Dr. James D. Sargent’s study shows that children have double risk of begin smoking after seeing R-rated movies. However, Dr. James said truth that the study regarded only young adolescents because other who is oldest might be to start smoking before they watching the investigated movies. I think Nicholas Balakar is right that most of the children start smoking because they want to imitate the famous people from R-rated movies; they believe that they have to take example from those protagonists, and recently cigarettes TV advertisements affected on teens smoking.

Younger teenagers spend a lot of time front the television and in the cinema. Especially they don’t want miss any celebrated or well-known movies. At that time, the teens want to imitate their favorite actors, especially simple things such as smoking. I know even in cartoons we can observe the episodes of the smoking; for example, in “Texas Tom”, in well-known cartoon “Tom and Jerry” Tom trippingly began to smoke when he seduced a beautiful kitty. Thus, any teen that spends a lot of time to view movies or cartoons where his/her favorite actor or characters smokes can exposure to become smokers.

For some teens is important to take example from their favorite protagonists because at that time, in their minds occur fast changes that confused them of everything. They have some psychological obstacles such as conversation with peers and parents and they want to do everything themselves, but they don’t know how do it. Therefore, they always try to find someone who can be their favorites to take example by them. For instance, recently I was waiting the bus at the bus station and saw one teen who smoked near to me. We made small talk with each other. When I asked him why he started smoking, he said that his favorite actor, whom I unfortunately forget, smokes unusual not like always. He started to display me what he had learned. The teen said that he spent a lot of time and many cigarettes to learn that type of smoking, and he wants to be like his actor. As a result, teens find out someone to imitate him or her.

Next, a few years ago, we could observe ads of cigarettes on TV. Sometime, the cigarettes were advertised by famous people. The children spent a lot of time front of the TV how I said above; so, they could see and take up smoking because of curiosity, or to look like adults. I remember the story how my close friend started to smoke. She started smoking at 14 just for curiosity. She said that at that time the smoking was so cool. So, her peers were delighted by her because she looked a modern. In addition, she bought and tried all of the commercial cigarettes that showed on TV. Therefore, the first reason for smoking was caused by advertisements. At that time, many teens had the greatest exposure to smoking because of commercials.

In short, the famous movies influenced to take up children smoking because of they want to imitate the well-know actors. Also, smoking increased by reason of commercials that children can see everywhere. Last few years cigarettes were prohibited to show on TV. It caused to reduce number of teen’s smoking. I think if our society will seriously take care about children antismoking we can make away of this problem.

3 comments:

  1. When I finished reading your blog your claim is very clear because I can actually explain well giving good examples and getting my full attention. Giving your reasons on your claim on the right track but it was a little off topic just barely when explaining on R-rated movies and cartoons but it was mostly about R-rated movies in which kept on explaining about cartoons which is okay but I needs to follow the exact claim. You evidence was very detailed a great example is when you wrote down explaining of children looking up to their favorite cartoons characters smoking causing them to actually do the same. All in all in was well done good writing as well a really well claim giving details good job.

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  2. Hello. I am a student in Dr. J’s class and I was asked to give you feedback on your revision of the CAT.
    First of all,

    I think your claim/thesis is very clear because you had a claim and thesis.


    Next,
    your reasons connect to the topic well and are easy to understand. One reason I liked was that you wrote how even in cartoons they be smoking and kids be watching these cartoons.


    your evidence was solid but general, as for example when you write about about a teenager told you that she started smoking because out of curiosity and because she thought it was cool and also because of advertisement.

    And when you do the introduction try to not fill it out with a bunch of quotes. The only thing you need is one qoute, your claim and a topic and three reasons for your introduction you don't need all those quotes in the beginning


    Lastly, I would like you to know that
    the whole essay was easy to read and that you did a good job!!!

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  3. I agree with your readers. This was a clear, well-supported response to the reading. Just remember to try to refer back to the reading throughout the response.

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